by Linda Boulanger     (Broken/Desert/Voices)

Her breasts heaved with every breath, straining against the bodice of the silk gown. Silk - supposedly spun by the gods, meant to entice as it fell in revealing layers over the satiny skin of young ladies waiting for their chosen. To Elenya it only impeded her escape through the thick brush.

What a waste. She thought of her trip to the courts as well as the expensive fabric and the excitement that had surrounded picking it out, fashioning it into a body-covering masterpiece that represented her future, her dreams. Her family should have saved their reserves, her destiny decided many years ago by higher authorities anyway. The only thing she’d needed to entice her warrior was her scent. Or was it his scent? She wasn’t sure, knowing only that she’d been marked, ceremonially injected with his blood as a child to belong to him when her season came – though neither of them would know the other until the appointed time.

Elenya, knowing she had been marked and her future assured, was no different from the other girls who dreamed of a lifetime dance with one of the elite warriors of the court. It meant she and her family would return to the luxury of the circle of the chosen once she came of age.

Only the moment Elenya realized the masters had matched her with Tahruk, she knew that would not be the case. Tahruk! Why? Their families had been enemies for generations. There had to be some mistake. She had to find a way, to find someone who could make it right. She had to get away, make her way to the house of the masters.

Ignoring the aching in her legs and lungs, she refused to pay heed to the burning of the cuts and scratches inflicted on her limbs by the cruel sticks and whipping grasses. She would notcry over the sounds of her beautiful black dress ripping as she ran. She glanced down at what now looked like shredded rags. Careful! Taking her eyes off the terrain could have made her lose her footing and then it would all be over. She could hear him not far behind. Only her slight size lent itself to her ability to outmaneuver him through the dense brush.

Elenya longed for the smooth desert sands of home. Life had seemed so promising then as she’d played and worked beside her sisters, making sure they stayed within earshot of the voices of the elders whose sole purpose was to protect the future of their people: her.

There it was! She could see the house of the masters. Elated that her uncanny sense of direction had led her right to it after seeing it only once, she was concerned about the clearing that lay before her. Her pursuer would be unhindered.

A man opened the house door causing hope to surge, hurling Elenya forward. He had to be one of the masters.

“My Lord! My Lord!” she screeched garnering the attention of men she hadn’t realized were there. Panic rose as they converged on her, though she dodged them, stopping only when she had thrown herself at the feet of the one she surmised to be in charge. Only when her arms wrapped around his legs did she dare glance back at her warrior who crossed the clearing at a more casual pace. Anger burned behind his eyes, their amber depths glowing within his sun-bronzed face. Even as she shivered, she was unable to break away from his gaze. She felt the pull of the marking as she watched him run a hand through his sandy hair. She fought against it.

“Tahruk? What is the meaning of this?” asked the voice above Elenya’s head.

“I wish to know that as well, Dahru.” As the warrior spoke, his chin tilted upward and he sniffed the air.

Dahru looked at his brethren before addressing the other man. “She … the woman is yours then?”

Tahruk nodded. He glared down at the dark beauty who attempted to scoot around the strong legs of her refuge. Dahru’s hands locked on her arms and lifted her to stand before him instead. She tried to look over her shoulder. Again, the unmistakable pull warred against her fear.

“Look at me.” The firm voice denoted care. He smiled as he wiped some of the grime from her face. “Why would you do this?” When she didn’t answer, he added, “What is your name, beauty?”

Her voice trembled as did her body. Gone was the brave woman who had fled her warrior. “I am Elenya of the Aleone Drille,” she answered quietly, listening for certain response from behind.

“Aleone!” Tahruk roared. Elenya pressed herself against Dahru. His strong arms encircled her.

“Silence!” the master commanded. No explanation was needed for the outburst. Everyone knew how the Aleone supposedly turned on Tahruk’s people long ago. The ensuing battle nearly caused the extinction of the elite Zanak Drille, a mighty force directly descended from royalty. The Aleone were acquitted, the king himself ruling it a misunderstanding.

“There must be a mistake…”

“No.” Dahru stopped Elenya’s verbalization of the thought that echoed through many heads. “The masters do not make mistakes. The future of your families is up to the two of you.”

“I am afraid…” Elenya whispered before looking over her shoulder at the stiff form of the warrior for whom she was chosen.

“He will not harm you, child. He is honor bound, like you.” Dahru made certain the young warrior heard as well.

Elenya nodded as Tahruk’s grip compressed the bones of her wrist. Head bowed, she followed, not bothering to fight the tears. Her dreams were shattered, the broken pieces washing away with each drop that fell to the hand that held her. Honor would have her pay for the sins of her ancestors. She had been chosen to dance for a lifetime in the arms of her enemy.


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10/10/2011 10:54

I ♥ this and want more, but you already know that. ;O)

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Laura lafontsee
10/10/2011 11:15

This is out and for sale? Gimmmeee gimmeee more..

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10/10/2011 12:06

More please. :)

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10/10/2011 12:20

If you want to read the "real beginning" click on the word BLOG up there on the right under my page picture to see how Elenya finds herself running through the woods with Tahruk chasing after her. There's a pretty awesome cover over there as well :)

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Laura Hern
10/10/2011 12:52

Still waiting for more! Exciting and dangerous......more, more!

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10/10/2011 14:10

Oh my! What a beginning! What an end! Please tell me there is more, that at least you'll continue? This was incredible and so beautifully composed.

Thank you so much for sharing!

Airicka Phoenix
http://airickaphoenix.com/Author/?cat=10

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10/10/2011 20:57

I'm there for the full story, Linda! I can't wait to read what surely will have to be a tumultuous relationship when it starts out with that much excitement! Beautiful writing! :-)

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10/10/2011 21:15

Okay, this word limit is for the birds. It's obvious we all want more!

Michelle
Concilium, July 2012

www.michelle-pickett.com

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10/11/2011 03:05

Well, there is no denying that this story must go on. I am so taken in by these characters. You are quite the little tease with this one:-) Just awesome!

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10/11/2011 15:25

Rich in detail and again different for you! Nicely done, Linda!

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Nissie
10/11/2011 17:47

Love it, Linda! I want more, too!

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Stephanie Mathis
10/11/2011 19:30

Now that is craftsmanship at it's finest! Loved this!

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Jennifer McMurrain
10/11/2011 19:55

What a fabulous story and don't even get me started on that last line. When do I get to read more?

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MonaLee Wilson
10/11/2011 21:54

Oh you teaser you. I for one am glad there is a word limit or I would never get any rest, sleep, work or anything else done but read these wonderful stories of yours. I noticed a whole bunch of titles of your work I need to get.

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Andrew E. Kaufman
10/12/2011 11:34

Doing the historical romance thing! I love how you aren't afraid to take risks and try different things. It's the mark of a fearless--and successful--writer.

Well done. Keep it up!

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10/12/2011 19:16

I finally got to read your story Linda... It feels very familiar to be destined for something one wants to escape at all costs... You've described this in an enticing way! Of course the real work between your characters is just starting!

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10/13/2011 03:42

Loved it !! I love your short stories , and this one is great , I really liked the whole plot of them being enemies , yet bound to each other , I can see this going on and being a book !!

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Myrna Gamble
10/13/2011 13:01

I don't know what to say...great, wonderful, exciting, well done, where is the rest of the story ? :) This could be the makings of one of your best books. Think about it.

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10/13/2011 14:02

I am actually working on this one and hope it will reach AT LEAST novella size very soon - though I think there is enough there for a full novel! Keep an eye on my blog, website, or FaceBook ... all accessible with a click below the profile pic on the upper right :)

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10/13/2011 21:04

I know you like the happy endings...and this delves so much deeper into the potential for what may not necessarily be so cheery and happy, but I LOVE it! Looking forward to the whole story! MMF

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